Glad you liked it, I'm having way too much fun with this. Here's attempt #2:

> EXIT THE BUILDING

You step into the sidewalk. Night has fallen in New York and the afternoon fog has turned into an evening mist, the lights of New Times Square glimmering through the water drops. You get your bearings and see a Tex-Mex food cart to the north, a nightclub about one hundred yards to the east and remember an expensive restaurant is only a block to the West

> GO TO THE NIGHT CLUB

You head to the nightclub and see a line leading up to the entrance. You see a sign that reads "Members Only".

> BECOME A MEMBER

You approach the bouncer and tell him you'd like to become a member. He says if you have to ask, you don't belong. You slip him $100 and ask him again. He says you need a password.

> ASK FOR THE PASSWORD

The bouncer tells you the password is "redrum". You head inside and see a long hallway with a red door at the end. You hear music coming from the door and head towards it.

> INVENTORY

You are carrying a wallet, phone, and keys.

> USE PHONE

You pull out your phone and see that you have a text message from an unknown number. The message reads "if you want to live, come to the red door at the end of the hallway".

> INSPECT WALLET

You open your wallet and see that you have $100 in cash and a credit card.

> GO TO THE RED DOOR

You approach the red door and knock. A voice from inside says "who is it?" You respond with your name. The voice says "wrong answer, try again". You knock again and say "redrum". The door opens and you are pulled inside.